Come and see my shining palace, built upon the sand!
That was what this (sorta) 24 page comic was based off of. I went to the 24-hour comic work session, finished this in five hours, and had too many things to do to stay the whole day, unfortunately. It was definitely a learning experience, and I'm glad I did it. I even like how some of this came out, though the writing is pretty atrocious. I like some of the layout, and I almost like the style of it -- I think if I work on it a little more, and add a little more detail (but not too much, because I do have a problem with losing the looseness and fluidity) then I would really like this style. Gonna work on that.
Also, love, love, love Edna St. Vincent Millay, forever.
EDIT: I just realized you couldn't see what was going on at all, so I split it up.